Economic Article Summary

Here is summary 2 assignment and the feedback of summary1 please have a loo, also go over summary 1 too. My professor thought it is too deep and much lol
Feedback of Summary 1
Clear description of the research question, enough detail on the data (maybe even too much detail), thoughtful opinion. I would add a little more detail on the method: what regression did the authors run (income as dependent variable, education as explanatory variable)?
A little more detail on the results would be good. What exactly are returns to education for criminals?
Good summary overall! But incorporate the comments for the next summary.