fix my “research methods “homework!

Here is professor comment:
“I highly recommend you have someone edit your assignments prior to submission. Your abstract must reveal to your audience the aim of your study is to discover if the in-car interlock devises deter the DUI offender from driving under the influence.

You stated your participants will be residing in Fairview Heights, Illinois; therefore, will you be able to administer questionnaires to people residing in this community who have had a DUI offense, are attending counseling, and have an in-car interlock device? You may need to broaden your geographical area to either Lake or Cook County.

There are passages in the Protocol and Benefits section that are very confusing. “
PLEASE FIX ABSTRACT,PROTOCOL,BENEFITS&RISK sections in attached file