This is what the teacher said and needs added I will assume additional refernees for the test for each one.Heather,I have read over your paper and am willing to grade it, but I am concerned that there

This is what the teacher said and needs added I will assume additional refernees for the test for each one.
Heather,
I have read over your paper and am willing to grade it, but I am concerned that there may have been a misunderstanding that has resulted in important content being omitted.  You have selected three domains, but discussion of tests to be used, the properties of those tests, and related content appears to have been left out.  For instance, with regard to anxiety you mention the MASC and the SCARED but do not actually discuss them.  You also mention interview, but don’t provide the required analysis of the approach.  
I am going to recommend that you read over the assignment and submit a revision that addresses the required elements. 
Dr. Swisher

This is what the teacher said and needs added I will assume additional refernees for the test for each one.Heather,I have read over your paper and am willing to grade it, but I am concerned that there

This is what the teacher said and needs added I will assume additional refernees for the test for each one.
Heather,
I have read over your paper and am willing to grade it, but I am concerned that there may have been a misunderstanding that has resulted in important content being omitted.  You have selected three domains, but discussion of tests to be used, the properties of those tests, and related content appears to have been left out.  For instance, with regard to anxiety you mention the MASC and the SCARED but do not actually discuss them.  You also mention interview, but don’t provide the required analysis of the approach.  
I am going to recommend that you read over the assignment and submit a revision that addresses the required elements. 
Dr. Swisher